Friday 1 November 2013

My Narrative Writing



I was inside helping my mum cook dinner, When we finished cooking we forgot to turn the stove off and then a little fire started we tried to stop it but it got bigger and bigger.  As it got bigger the fire got to hot for me so I tried to run outside but the way was blocked and a wood with fire on it landed on me and the fire got closer and closer to me. My dad tried to call the firemen to come and help us but the phone melted and it turned into ash. So my dad picked us all up and he ran quickly outside and we survived in it.








1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Hi Ajani,

I like that you put good words in your story
One thing you maybe need to work on is put more powerful words in.

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