Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts

Friday, 1 November 2013

My Narrative Writing



I was inside helping my mum cook dinner, When we finished cooking we forgot to turn the stove off and then a little fire started we tried to stop it but it got bigger and bigger.  As it got bigger the fire got to hot for me so I tried to run outside but the way was blocked and a wood with fire on it landed on me and the fire got closer and closer to me. My dad tried to call the firemen to come and help us but the phone melted and it turned into ash. So my dad picked us all up and he ran quickly outside and we survived in it.








Wednesday, 30 October 2013

The Scary Tsunami





Once I was swimming at the beach then suddenly a wave came I thought it was just an normal wave but it wasn't it was a tsunami when I saw the people far away swimming in the beach got pulled in by the massive 30 feet. I was swimming as fast as a speeding scared sweating cheetah.


Then a whale got pulled into so I ran faster so I wouldn't get squashed by the big whale and then I saw that the whale wasn't going to land on me. It was just going to stay up in the big wave when it came near me. So I ran in the city but the tsunami was getting closer and closer and it went over my house and it went over my grandparents house.

Now I had nowhere to sleep so I had to sleep on the streets instead when i fell asleep i heard someone calling for help it was my mum, dad, grandma and grandpa they were looking to see if i was still alive but when they stood up they fainted on the ground.